It's kind of tough since we're all familiar with the project, but are the numbers recognizable as "826" or are they as reading something else. The logo will dictate my choices in packaging so are there any favorites? Any comments would be helpful, thanks.
the second one is working better for me. but I do like how you've incorporated the two parts in the first one. what if the dot on the questionmark was the dot on the i? (that would take some reconfiguring and might not work at all)
I agree with Emily, the second is much stronger. There are some technical, typographic issues with the first. I don't think you need to force a literal connection between "826" and "Baltimore", though. I would just put a little more breathing room between them.
Second option is the way to go here. I think the alignment for the dot over the "i" is working pretty well as is, and if you rearrange it, it will not make contextual sense since it's an uppercase not lowercase "i" in Baltimore right now.
How does this work with your store mark? Do they relate to one another? Where is the rest of your material in relation to this?
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It's kind of tough since we're all familiar with the project, but are the numbers recognizable as "826" or are they as reading something else. The logo will dictate my choices in packaging so are there any favorites? Any comments would be helpful, thanks.
ReplyDeletethe second one is working better for me. but I do like how you've incorporated the two parts in the first one. what if the dot on the questionmark was the dot on the i? (that would take some reconfiguring and might not work at all)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Emily, the second is much stronger. There are some technical, typographic issues with the first. I don't think you need to force a literal connection between "826" and "Baltimore", though. I would just put a little more breathing room between them.
ReplyDeleteSecond option is the way to go here. I think the alignment for the dot over the "i" is working pretty well as is, and if you rearrange it, it will not make contextual sense since it's an uppercase not lowercase "i" in Baltimore right now.
ReplyDeleteHow does this work with your store mark? Do they relate to one another?
Where is the rest of your material in relation to this?