This is more of a system than a single mark, but I was hoping to get some feedback on it. Does that typesetting work for you? With the big text centered and the ancillary text jutting off of the edges like that?
It does and it doesn't. I feel that the diagonals really interfere with your mark right now, and the "the" and "co" aren't as formally appealing when they are at that extreme angle.
Students continue to explore the discipline of graphic design through problems that integrate conceptual thinking with formal visual experimentation.
Students are encouraged to develop languages of design that reflect their own artistic and cultural identities while communicating to various audiences. The properties and traditions of various genres of public address are explored.
This is more of a system than a single mark, but I was hoping to get some feedback on it. Does that typesetting work for you? With the big text centered and the ancillary text jutting off of the edges like that?
It does and it doesn't. I feel that the diagonals really interfere with your mark right now, and the "the" and "co" aren't as formally appealing when they are at that extreme angle.
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