I decided to take the advice given last week and experiment with various fills in different parts of the logo. I still think I'm more fond of the first, maybe the second too. Any other options would be greatly appreciated!
I definitely think the middle two are working more than the outside ones. I personally am partial to number three because of the flashlight actually being in darkness, it makes it more obviously a flashlight. I think you need to track out the type a bit for "Paranormal Outfitters", it feels a bit crowded for me.
yeah, the middle two are working really nicely. if I had to choose between them, I think the second from the left is working a bit better, if just because it's easier to read. (I also agree with andy about the tracking)
Students continue to explore the discipline of graphic design through problems that integrate conceptual thinking with formal visual experimentation.
Students are encouraged to develop languages of design that reflect their own artistic and cultural identities while communicating to various audiences. The properties and traditions of various genres of public address are explored.
I'm really feeling the second from the left. The black ring works really nicely holding the center button in this iteration.
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I definitely think the middle two are working more than the outside ones. I personally am partial to number three because of the flashlight actually being in darkness, it makes it more obviously a flashlight. I think you need to track out the type a bit for "Paranormal Outfitters", it feels a bit crowded for me.
ReplyDeleteOverall, sweet work.
yeah, the middle two are working really nicely. I think the second from the left is a little easier to read though.
ReplyDeleteyeah, the middle two are working really nicely. if I had to choose between them, I think the second from the left is working a bit better, if just because it's easier to read. (I also agree with andy about the tracking)
ReplyDeleteshit, sorry for the double comment. I thought it didn't show up the first time.
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