I really love the red on the top right package, but I do think that it may be a little bit too busy. The thin white serifs of the text get lost in the background, and I can't read the text on the back at all. Maybe you could consider putting a solid color on the backs of the packages, thickening the text, or playing around more with transparency.
The light text that you used on your right logos is really interesting conceptually. It definitely seems more "mysterious" than your other examples.
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ReplyDeleteI really love the red on the top right package, but I do think that it may be a little bit too busy. The thin white serifs of the text get lost in the background, and I can't read the text on the back at all. Maybe you could consider putting a solid color on the backs of the packages, thickening the text, or playing around more with transparency.
The light text that you used on your right logos is really interesting conceptually. It definitely seems more "mysterious" than your other examples.
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