Is this an example of how the mark could be tiled to create a pattern, or is the titling of this element make up the mark?
I think if you unify the spacing between them this is already pretty strong, but I would still like to see something closer to an unfolded box shape, which this is kind of alluding to. Perhaps look at shapes like this: http://4volt.com/Blog/images/4volt_com/Blog/Box%20Folding%20Diagram%20350.jpg
826 mark is really strong right now. One thing to refine is the spacing/centering of your numerals in your panels. It's just a little bit off right now, but other than that, they look good.
For your store marks, I'm responding strongest to the top 2 directions. The horizontal arrangement contrasts your diamond shaped box nicely.
Of the 2, I prefer the treatment where all the type is centered, and I'd consider tracking out "DEPOT" a bit. It's a little tight right now, and it would hold its own better with the larger "FORT" if so.
Students continue to explore the discipline of graphic design through problems that integrate conceptual thinking with formal visual experimentation.
Students are encouraged to develop languages of design that reflect their own artistic and cultural identities while communicating to various audiences. The properties and traditions of various genres of public address are explored.
Is this an example of how the mark could be tiled to create a pattern, or is the titling of this element make up the mark?
ReplyDeleteI think if you unify the spacing between them this is already pretty strong, but I would still like to see something closer to an unfolded box shape, which this is kind of alluding to. Perhaps look at shapes like this: http://4volt.com/Blog/images/4volt_com/Blog/Box%20Folding%20Diagram%20350.jpg
826 mark is really strong right now. One thing to refine is the spacing/centering of your numerals in your panels. It's just a little bit off right now, but other than that, they look good.
ReplyDeleteFor your store marks, I'm responding strongest to the top 2 directions. The horizontal arrangement contrasts your diamond shaped box nicely.
Of the 2, I prefer the treatment where all the type is centered, and I'd consider tracking out "DEPOT" a bit. It's a little tight right now, and it would hold its own better with the larger "FORT" if so.
Good refinement on these.