Wednesday, April 14, 2010

The Little Shoppe of Grammar, mark finalizations


So after suggestions from last week, I've integrated the 826 aspect into the ribbon mark (the option on the right). I've also messed around with the solo 826 mark by separating "Baltimore", but I don't think it's very successful. Thoughts?

2 comments:

  1. Looking good! If you want to split Baltimore like that, why not just "B" – "MORE", in both instances?

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  2. Ribbon is working really nicely. I miss the "quotation" marks when they are not in your bottom right solution.

    How about 826 on top and Bmore on the bottom in your leftmost "x" lockup? I think it would solve all your problems formally.

    Conceptually and in terms of execution, this is getting really nice.

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