I'd consider making the first sentence a question instead of a statement.
"Crashing and burning? We're here to help!" And so forth.
I think the disclaimer could be pushed even further to make it more ridiculous.
I like the term "throw in the towel", maybe it should be a towel that you strap to your wrist so you can't throw it....with encouraging words printed on it!
Students continue to explore the discipline of graphic design through problems that integrate conceptual thinking with formal visual experimentation.
Students are encouraged to develop languages of design that reflect their own artistic and cultural identities while communicating to various audiences. The properties and traditions of various genres of public address are explored.
In the first sentence, the comma should be a semi-colon. "Infrastructural" is awkward, perhaps reword the second half of the "*"
ReplyDeleteI'm super pumped to see it all!
I'd consider making the first sentence a question instead of a statement.
ReplyDelete"Crashing and burning? We're here to help!" And so forth.
I think the disclaimer could be pushed even further to make it more ridiculous.
I like the term "throw in the towel", maybe it should be a towel that you strap to your wrist so you can't throw it....with encouraging words printed on it!